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Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is a once in a lifetime chance that you have to take. Luke was very lucky to be able to help people in different countries that were left in ruins after the war ended. In Luke's life, Don was very important. He helped him become the person that Luke was supposed to become. Luke is very grateful for Don. Without Luke and everyone else it would have been a lot harder to transport the animals to different places in the world. You should become a Seagoing Cowboy because you get to experience the feeling of helping others who are in need. Another reason why people should become a Seagoing Cowboy is because you can take tours and go see different places. For example if you went to France you could go to Paris and see the Eifel Tower! Being a Seagoing Cowboy can be very fun! People need Seagoing Cowboys because they might not have enough money to stay on the boats with their animals. Also, people won't want their animals to be alone during a long boat ride. Seagoing Cowboys can also help with giving animals comany. Seagoing Cowboys are also needed to take care of the animals. For example, if the captain of the ship is too busy to feed the animals then no one will feed them! Then the animals could die! Right there on the ship! If the animals die, the people have no where to put them. What is next? Throwing them overboard? We need Seagoing Cowboys for many reasons. These are just a couple of reasons. Being a Seagoing Cowboy is not easy. Some of the trips that Luke took lasted two whole weeks! That is pretty long. It is also expensive. On one of the trips that Luke took they had about 335 horses plus enough food for them to eat! That is a lot of food. On that same trip, Luke arrived the day the Pacific war ended. Being a Seagoing Cowboy is also difficujlt because they probably had to cross through many storms. Also, they were on the ship during the Pacific war. Serving as a Seagoing Cowboy takes courage, responsibility, hard work, and possitive attitudes. That is exactly what Luke had. We are thankful for what Luke did. Luke is an inspiration to us all. We look up to him as a friend and as a follower in his foot steps to become the best person we can be. We thank not just Luke but everyone else who was there right by his side, helping him. We thank everyone who was not by his side but did what he did to help others. Luke did great things, great things that we all want to do. Luke was amazing!
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Using technology is a good way to help other in a classroom that are suffering. Technology is a important part of everday lives each expression is compared against a neutral face showing no emotions. This can determine if someone needs help in the class. Technology is very valueable it helps us daily and we don't even know it. The use of technology to read expressions in a students face in classroom is valueable because like the article stated "a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored during the lesson. So the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of studetns in a classroom can be valueable. It can help teachers with students it can either tell the teacher if the student is liking the subject or wether he or she is bored. It can also help with communication is can help students communicate more with their classmates. So yes i think that technology is a valuebale way to read students expressions The use of technology to read emotional expressions is a good way to understand other people better i love this idea. It can help lot's of people out in the future especially teachers it can help them know if there lesson was boring or interesting. So that's why i think some teacher would love to see this form of technology at our schools it can really help the school out.
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the story " The Challenge of Exploing Venus " is an informative piece about the dangers and the risks of traviling to Venus. The author breaks down what the exploration would be and he decribes it as a very hard task humans have never done before. The author talks abou hovering above the planet to try and research ground level things, He decribes that task as hard because of the lack of visbility and light but he was certin it ws possible. The author proceeds to go on about the dificulities of this space exploreation but is still driven to research. he said venus is a twin planet to earth. Also known as the siser planet or the evening star. the planet is very similar in size and was once a canadate for life. Im concluding that this was a very informative piece and the author supports the idea well. venus should be our next universal conquest.
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Technology has changed a lot of ways that we live today. Nowadays we have phones that can recogonize our faces by just looking at it, anyone could make any facial expression by looking at their phone and it will set it as a passcode and in which phones are protected from other people that try to get into it. Having a computer that recgonizes is an outstanding piece of work, and as younger kids get much older they will be able to learn about how technology has improved the way of living. Students in this era may have some kind interest in going into computer science or go into anything that has to do with technology. The use of technology that can read facial expressions is remarkable. Students will be absolutely amazed of how a computer can show wheather the person is either happy, confused, sad, or angry. Students can use the facial expression software to find out how they are feeling. For instince in paragraph 6 the author states "If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different (par.6)." In this quote the author clearly explains how amazingly smart a comupter can be. Being able to develop that technology is one of a kind. The author also stated in paragraph 6, video games and video surgery technology works the same way, for example many students enjoy playing video games in their spare time, and if they are into a game they are really into, the technology and software bulit into the game will able to show the audience the characters expression inside of the game. Moving foward, the famous painting of Mona Lisa may seem like she is 100 percent smiling right? Wrong. The famous painting has had many people have conterversal arguments about her facial expression, thinking she is serious or smiling. According to the author, they explain "She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry (par.1)." This shows how much techonlogy has improved during the past years. Having new software that can inform students the real expression on someone's face through face to face or through a picture or painting is insane. Teachers will be able to ask their studnets how people are feeling by they way they express their emotion, and show them the actual feeling behind the expression. Futhermore, students can have an idea of how the way technology works and how it is set up. Being able to work with technology that can show statistics the way people express their feelings is outstanding. In paragraph 9, the author explains how the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion explains how a person's facial muscle moves while they express the way they are feeling. It also states that it can even help produce the emotion while peforming the facial expression "According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them (par.9)." In conclusion, studnets that have accsess to this advanced technology that can read expressions is valuable and worth keeping in the future. Not only will it amuse the students but it can also help them learn about the new improvements that are being created while they get older. Technology is becoming a much more valuable, powerful tool and helping change the way we live and how we view technology.
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If you don't like sitting around all day than it is a great opportunity to participate in the seagoing Cowboys program. You should join this program. There are many reasons why you should join. Also if you are really tired between trips there is time to do your own thing. If you join the program I garentee you will have a good time. You should join the program because it's helping people while having fun. Also if you do join when we are going to our next place you have lots of time to sleep and have fun. We go to many different places some of them you might never of seen or maybe you haven't seen any of them. The program has helped many people and knowing that you helped them just makes you feel a lot better. Those were some reasons why you should join the program. There are many of other programs but many people have found this particular one the best. Although some days when it's not nice outside we have even more time to ourselves. There are many of places we still haven't seen yet and we hope to see them with you. So join this program and help people in need. That is why you should Jin this program.
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In "The Challenge of Exporing Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because Venus is sometimes called the " Evening Star" this is in paragraph 1 the first sentence. Sometimes referred as Earth's "twin," Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus because Venus is sometimes right around the the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxixde blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the cloudds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and cloud have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit. this is why the author suggests that studying the "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.
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Venus is worthy place to study but dangerous. The reaosn in doing theis is because of the challenge there is. trying to study something with out going for yourself. that is pretty hard to do. One you have the biuld something that will either help your or something that can with so the temputure of Venus. Two the distance of getting there and back. Gotta have something to hold that uch fuel to go there and come home. if a human is going you need to have a food stock for them to last of the Planet. Just like when they sent a robot to the planet it had to out a material tthat can withstand the planet itself., But that only lasted two weeks. Now they are try to go for longer the two weeks. In Conclusion i know that tcan do it its just going to take some time for it to happen.
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